影响中国考生雅思写作成绩的因素

来源：搜学搜课     时间：2020/12/16 15:49:18

杭州小语种培训学校：下面为大家整理的是关于雅思写作考试的影响因素，尤其是对中国考生来说，希望写作的思维习惯并不好掌握，所以总有有一些比较共性的因素影响了大家的雅思写作成绩。下面小编就为大家整理了相关的信息，希望对大家有所帮助和借鉴。

错误一：语言化

根据能量守恒定律(Law of energy conservation)，即“各种能量形式互相转换是有方向和条件限制的，能量相互转换时其量值不变，表明能量不能被创造或消灭”，人们在使用语言描述事物变化时，应尽可能避免语言过于化，尤其是在使用第二语言进行正式的书面表述时，更应该注意该语言中非化表达方式的学习，这样才能尽显文章内容的客观性。

这是绝大多数中国考生在面对雅思写作时所忽视的，大家可以对比如下两组句子：

This tends to occur whenever there is a downturn in commodity prices.

This occurs whenever there is a downturn in commodity prices.

A child learning a foreign language at primary school causes confusion between their native language and the foreign one.

A child learning a foreign language at primary school is likely to cause confusion between their native language and the foreign one.

杭州小语种培训学校：为解决该问题，一些表达委婉语气的用语和句式，考生可以尝试使用，如：may, might, would, could, largely, possibly, probably, be likely (unlikely) to, be inclined to, tend to, to a large (some) extent, there is a higher probability/possibility that…等。

错误二: 只回答部分问题

An increasing number of people are moving and living in big cities. Why is this case? Is it a positive or negative trend? (2010年1月23日 G类) 该题有两个问题，很多考生在作答时忽视了问，只回答第二问，抑或是把问和该现象积极的一面混为一谈，如：

On the one hand, living in big cities brings about a considerable number of advantages, which is also why people move to big cities. Initially, it is undeniable that work conditions in big cities are usually better that those in countries and small cities. With more work opportunities and a higher level of salary, people in other places, especially the young, are inclined to move to big cities. Subsequently, not only does living in big cities offer people better work conditions, but also it affords dwellers with facilities of higher quality. These facilities, such as the premium hospitals and education resources, are extremely attractive to countryside people and those in small cities. (考生答卷)

杭州小语种培训学校：该现象的原因应从大城市移民的角度考虑，如可以享受更好的生活设施，教育资源和就业机会等。而其积极的一面应从城市居民或管理者的角度考虑，如大量的“移民”给城市带来了更多的劳动力和税收。