上海雅思作文超详细学习方法分享

五战雅思作文从6到8，超详细学习方法分享大作文主体段的写法，主题句的重要性，怎样举例论证自己的观点，让步段的写法，过渡句的承上启下，每节课都有作文练习。

这里给大家讲解一下主题句的写法和大作文主体段落的展开：

议论文段落的构成就是

Topic sentence 主题句

Supporting sentence 支撑句

For example 举例

Concluding sentence 总结句

请看下面段落

题目：The news media has become more influential in people’s lives, some people think it is a negative development, to what extent do you agree or disagree

主题句：It is undeniable that media coverage plays a crucial role in disseminating（传播） information and connecting the world to individuals.支撑句：To be more specific, individuals are liable to（倾向于） make better-informed （更明智的）decisions when they gain access to a wide range of news covering aspects of their lives. 举例句：For example, a college graduate student is in urgent need of latest news about employment and career path.总结句： Therefore, news related to these items is more helpful to them than other social resources.

这才是议论文段落的构成方式，而很多同学在逻辑展开和举例论证方面做的不好，有时一个段落写几个点，一句带过，却没有把一个点展开来论证，这在雅思写作评分中是及其忌讳的。

以下这一段是批改团里同学的作文，关于老人是该在家还是在养老院的

题目 Should old people stay at home or be placed in nursing homes?

The most important benefit is that professional doctors give intensive medical cares to aging people in retirement homes much more easily than those people at home. Besides, they can receive a proper diet prepared by dieticians to meet their individual requirements. This is especially good for those with auditory function disabilities. The greater flexibility of the regular medical check-ups allows for more chance to identify disease in its early stage. Importantly, their commonly held reports of physical examination can help distinguish them from other healthy people.

有没有感觉看着特别费劲？首先这一段主题句不突出，我读了很多遍才看出作者的意思是 It is beneficial for old people to spend time in nursing home. 其次，到底哪些方面有益呢？作者写的逻辑混乱。

按照我的理解，应该是 Firstly,staying at nursery home means getting access to professional care and nutritious food, which can not be acquired at home. 同学们可以就这一点举例。 后面再加一点，Secondly, frequent medical check-up and physical examination to prevent the occurrence of age-related disease is another advantage. 这个点不用举例了，一个段落两个点可以了。

第二次写作居然是产假（maternity leave) 的利与弊。紧张了几分钟之后，在考场上奋笔疾书。小作文还差很后一段， 十天后，成绩查到了，作文只有6.5。我非常难过，拿去复议，两个月后，邮箱收到邮件，复议成功，写作升高。成绩单上的6.5变成了7！

开头段这样写：改写原来段落

The line graphs display the quantities of goods transported in the Uk from 1974 to 2002 by road, water, rail and pipeline.

主体段一段从数据很明显数值很大的陆运road写起,:

The most distinctive feature was seen in the category of road, in 1974, 70 million tonnes of goods were transported by road, after experiencing some fluctuations（起伏，波动）, the figure increased dramatically to 90 million tonnes in 1998 and increased minorly to 100 million tonnes in 2002.

接下来写在它下面的水运water, 也是增加， 数值稍微减小

A similar trend was seen in the category of water, although the initial number was 40 million tonnes from 1974 to 1978, it experienced a minorrise to 60 million tonnes in 1982 and reached 62 million tonnnes in 2002 after experiencing some fluctuations.

再写铁路运输rail, 相反趋势，

However, an inversely trend was seen in the category of rail,although it displayed an identical figure as the data of water between theyears of 1974 and 1978, it showed a decreasing trend and reached 41 milliontonnes in 2002.

很后写体量很小的管道运输： pipeline

Pipeline was the least important transport code even though itdisplayed a ring trend, it transported 5 million tonnes of goods in 1974andreached the peak at 20 million tonnes in 1995, then the figure leveled off atthe same data of 20 million tonnes till 2002.

结尾段落：注意结尾段落不要出现数据了

In conclusion, it is evident that road was the dominant transportcode from 1974 and 2002 while pipe line was the least important one whichcarried the least amount of goods.

大作文也学会了一些新的写法，例如把原因和解决方案写在一段，逻辑更为清晰。

Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to school. what are the reasons, how can we solve this problem ?