珠海雅思作文应该怎么开头

俗话说，万事开头难，好的开端是成功的一半。那么现在问题来了，作文开头到底怎么写？

常见误区

◆需规避雅思写作开头一：中式英文

典型失败案例：

Topic 1: The happiest moment in your life

In our life, there are always some moments whichmake your heart flower opened angrily...

Topic 2: The population problem

The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can alwayssee people mountain people sea there.

Topic 3: Is there fairness in today’s business world?

I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I alwayschoppedwhen I go out buy things...

Topic 4: The advantage of being a nice person

Being a niceperson have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he willget "baoying".

◆需规避雅思写作开头二：废话连篇

典型失败案例：

Topic 1: Should college students be allowed to get married?

This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married...

修改方案：开门见山直奔主题

In my opinion,it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married.

Topic 2: Will modern technology, such as the Internet,ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?

Ok, this topic isa very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

Topic 3: The importance of environmental protection

Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!

◆需规避雅思写作开头三：观点模煳

典型失败案例：

Topic: Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think this topicis very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married,so this topic is very difficult for me...

◆需规避雅思写作开头四：偏离主题

典型失败案例：

Topic: It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools,and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

◆需规避雅思写作开头五：语法错误

典型失败案例：

Topic: If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?

About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right.Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.

◆需规避雅思写作开头六：过分简单

典型失败案例：

Topic: The importance of environmental protection

This issue issurely very important, let’s talk about it!

◆需规避雅思写作开头七：用词不当

典型失败案例：

Topic: Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

◆需规避雅思写作开头八：意思重复

典型失败案例：

Topic: Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

◆需规避雅思写作开头九：观点武断

典型失败案例：

Topic 1: The importance of confidence

In my opinion,confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful peoplein the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

Topic 2: The solution to the traffic problem

I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be not raffic problem any more.

◆需规避雅思写作开头十：俗语（不是说不可以用，而是因为很多烤鸭使用的时候都会不自觉的用中式英语 让考官不知所云）

典型失败案例：

Topic 1: Is it good to have a large family?

I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: "Many sons,many lucks"...

正确说法：Happiness lies in having many children

Topic 2: Should we pretend to know everything or admitour ignorance?

We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: "Know is know, don’t know is don’t know"...

Topic 3: Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole...

Topic 4: The advantage of being a nice person

I believe one sentence: "A good person is all life safe". We Chinese people always say: "Good has good pay, bad has bad pay".